Explorers, or boys messing about? notes
Explorers, or boys messing about? Either way, taxpayer gets rescue bill
First Paragraph:
"Their last expedition ended in farce"
- immediately the two men are introduced as a comical mess and we think of them as ridiculous characters
Second Paragraph:
"Yesterday a new adventure.."
- use of word "adventure" describes the men as childish and makes fun of them
- hints of sarcasm
"...tragedy when their helicopter plunged..."
-use powerful language,"tragedy" and plunged express drama and emphasise how badly it could have ended
Third Paragraph:
"The men were plucked"
-use of the word "plucked" makes the men sound small and less heroic - mocking them
"Royal Navy, the RAF and British coastguards"
- list of important authorities to imply that the men are not as important and had to be saved
Fifth Paragraph:
"Experts questioned the wisdom.."
- use of the word "experts" makes the men look stupid - implying that they are amateurs
- hint of sarcasm in the use of the word "wisdom" implying that the men have none
Sixth Paragraph:
"'trusty helicopter'"
- use of quotation marks is very sarcastic
- implies that the writer believes that it was definitely not a very reliable helicopter
Seventh Paragraph:
"boys messing about with a helicopter"
- use of the word "boys" shows them to be very immature
- the phrase "messing about" implies that they were just playing and had no idea what they were doing
Eigth Paragraph:
"Mr Brooks, 42 and 40 year old Mr Smith"
- up until now it seemed as if they were only 18 from the way they had been described
- makes them look even more ridiculous, for the reader to find out their real age now
End Paragraph:
"bottoms kicked and be sent home"
- ends the article describing the two men as naughty children
- making fun of them
Their last expedition ended in farce when
the Russians threatened to send in military
planes to intercept them as they tried to
cross into Siberia via the icebound Bering
Strait.
Yesterday a new adventure undertaken by
British explorers Steve Brooks and Quentin
Smith almost led to tragedy when their
helicopter plunged into the sea off
Antarctica.
The men were plucked from the icy water
by a Chilean naval ship after a nine-hour
rescue which began when Mr Brooks
contacted his wife, Jo Vestey, on his
satellite phone asking for assistance. The
rescue involved the Royal Navy, the RAF
and British coastguards.
Last night there was resentment in some
quarters that the men’s adventure had cost
the taxpayers of Britain and Chile tens of
thousands of pounds.
Experts questioned the wisdom of taking a
small helicopter — the four-seater Robinson
R44 has a single engine — into such a
hostile environment.
There was also confusion about what
exactly the men were trying to achieve. A
website set up to promote the Bering Strait
expedition claims the team were planning
to fly from the north to south pole in their
“trusty helicopter”.
But Ms Vestey claimed she did not know
what the pair were up to, describing them
as “boys messing about with a helicopter”.
The drama began at around 1am British
time when Mr Brooks, 42, and 40-year-old
Mr Smith, also known as Q, ditched into the
sea 100 miles off Antarctica, about 36
miles north of Smith Island, and scrambled
into their liferaft.
Mr Brooks called his wife in London on his
satellite phone. She said: “He said they
were both in the liferaft but were okay and
could I call the emergency people?”
Meanwhile, distress signals were being
beamed from the ditched helicopter and
from Mr Brooks’ Breitling emergency
watch, a wedding present.
The signals from the aircraft were
deciphered by Falmouth* coastguard and
passed on to the rescue coordination
centre at RAF Kinloss in Scotland.
The Royal Navy’s ice patrol ship, HMS
Endurance, which was 180 miles away
surveying uncharted waters, began
steaming towards the scene and dispatched
its two Lynx helicopters.
One was driven back because of poor
visibility but the second was on its way
when the men were picked up by a Chilean
naval vessel at about 10.20am British time.
Though the pair wore survival suits and the
weather at the spot where they ditched
was clear, one Antarctic explorer told Mr
Brooks’ wife it was “nothing short of a
miracle” that they had survived.
Both men are experienced adventurers. Mr
Brooks, a property developer from London,
has taken part in expeditions to 70
countries in 15 years. He has trekked solo
to Everest base camp and walked barefoot
for three days in the Himalayas. He has
negotiated the white water rapids of the
Zambezi river by kayak and survived a
charge by a silver back gorilla in the Congo.
He is also a qualified mechanical engineer
and pilot.
He and his wife spent their honeymoon
flying the helicopter from Alaska to Chile.
The 16,000-mile trip took three months.
Mr Smith, also from London, claims to have
been flying since the age of five. He has
twice flown a helicopter around the globe
and won the world freestyle helicopter
flying championship.
Despite their experience, it is not the first
time they have hit the headlines for the
wrong reasons.
In April, Mr Brooks and another explorer,
Graham Stratford, were poised to become
the first to complete a crossing of the 56-
mile wide frozen Bering Strait between the
US and Russia in an amphibious vehicle,
Snowbird VI, which could carve its way
through ice floes and float in the water in
between.
But they were forced to call a halt after
the Russian authorities told them they
would scramble military helicopters to lift
them off the ice if they crossed the border.
Ironically, one of the aims of the
expedition, for which Mr Smith provided air
back-up, was to demonstrate how good
relations between east and west had
become.
The wisdom of the team’s latest adventure
was questioned by, among others, Günter
Endres, editor of Jane’s Helicopter Markets
and Systems, said: “I’m surprised they used
the R44. I wouldn’t use a helicopter like
that to go so far over the sea. It sounds as
if they were pushing it to the maximum”.
A spokesman for the pair said it was not
known what had gone wrong. The flying
conditions had been “excellent”.
The Ministry of Defence said the taxpayer
would pick up the bill, as was normal in
rescues in the UK and abroad. The
spokesperson said it was “highly unlikely”
it would recover any of the money.
Last night the men were on their way to
the Chilean naval base Eduardo Frei, where
HMS Endurance was to pick them up. Ms
Vestey said: “They have been checked and
appear to be well. I don’t know what will
happen to them once they have been
picked up by HMS Endurance — they’ll
probably have their bottoms kicked and be
sent home the long way”.
Steven Morris
Falmouth*: coastal town in Cornwall, England
First Paragraph:
"Their last expedition ended in farce"
- immediately the two men are introduced as a comical mess and we think of them as ridiculous characters
Second Paragraph:
"Yesterday a new adventure.."
- use of word "adventure" describes the men as childish and makes fun of them
- hints of sarcasm
"...tragedy when their helicopter plunged..."
-use powerful language,"tragedy" and plunged express drama and emphasise how badly it could have ended
Third Paragraph:
"The men were plucked"
-use of the word "plucked" makes the men sound small and less heroic - mocking them
"Royal Navy, the RAF and British coastguards"
- list of important authorities to imply that the men are not as important and had to be saved
Fifth Paragraph:
"Experts questioned the wisdom.."
- use of the word "experts" makes the men look stupid - implying that they are amateurs
- hint of sarcasm in the use of the word "wisdom" implying that the men have none
Sixth Paragraph:
"'trusty helicopter'"
- use of quotation marks is very sarcastic
- implies that the writer believes that it was definitely not a very reliable helicopter
Seventh Paragraph:
"boys messing about with a helicopter"
- use of the word "boys" shows them to be very immature
- the phrase "messing about" implies that they were just playing and had no idea what they were doing
Eigth Paragraph:
"Mr Brooks, 42 and 40 year old Mr Smith"
- up until now it seemed as if they were only 18 from the way they had been described
- makes them look even more ridiculous, for the reader to find out their real age now
End Paragraph:
"bottoms kicked and be sent home"
- ends the article describing the two men as naughty children
- making fun of them
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